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©2007-2009 ~zenphoenixa
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(Link to Part 1: [link] )

PAGE 11: [link]
PAGE 12: [link]
PAGE 13: [link]
PAGE 14: [link]
PAGE 15: [link]
PAGE 16: [link]
PAGE 17: [link]
PAGE 18: [link]
PAGE 19: [link]
PAGE 20: [link]

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CHARACTERS (for part two): Fayt Leingod (aka. I eat fire codes for breakfast :slow: ), Albel Nox (aka. whywhyWHY can’t I get laid? O__o ), Nel Zelpher (aka. bitchslap for the win :spank: ), Clair Lasbard (aka. right back at you Nelly baby :eyes: ), Sophia Esteed (aka. red is soooo my colour! :stab: ) and Peppita Rossetti (aka. I swear it was tomato juice but I bet you don’t believe me… >__>;; )

OWNER: Tri-Ace. I’m 99.9% certain that they never intended their characters to be abused in this way. :XD:

PIC STATUS: Fanart comic (fan source: “Star Ocean: Till the End of Time”), sequel to “Selective Hearing” - [link] , “Hold your peace” - [link] and “Honeymoon: Part 1” - [link]

MEDIUMS: 0.2 Artline felt tip (line art) and Photoshop CS (colouring)

DOWNLOADS:
- Various manga effect brushes and speech bubbles downloaded from - [link]
- Zoomlines downloaded from - [link]
- Blood splatter brushes (pg 14 and 19) downloaded from [link]

FONTS USED:
- General font: “Anime Ace” – download here: [link]
- “Slap” font (pg 3): “Baby Kruffy” – download here: [link]
- “Crash” font (pg 6): “Aarco” – download here: [link]

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ARTIST THOUGHTS: You all thought I was dead, didn’t you??? :evillaugh: Well actually if you thought that, you’re not wrong since I’m dead now. X____x *Cough* This comic has been like some sort of fuzzy tipped thorn in my side since Febuary, and I use that choice of description since drawing this comic has been simultaneously amusing and as fun as getting my toenails pulled out one by one by terrorists, and as if that wasn’t enough I still have part 3 to do. ~_____~;;; *Glutton for self punishment*

BUT for the moment I’m relaxing now that this is done at last :faint: :faint: :faint: and there really isn’t that much that I want to say about it, since I should hope it speaks for itself! :XD: One thing I should probably point out before some of you slaughter me is that I don’t actually have a vendetta against Peppita – it’s just that removing her in “that fashion” ^^; was the easiest way of getting rid of her without adding on an extra page, which would’ve given me a nervous breakdown. X____x If it’s any consolation, I was originally going to have her lead the fangirls but that would’ve required explaining, plus there was room on the last page for fangirls only hence you (hopefully) understand my predicament. :laughing: Also in case some of you have forgotten the significance, the costumes Albel and Fayt are wearing on pg 19 belong to Gonnella and Ursus from Peppita’s dance troupe. ALBEL MAKES A SEXY CLOWN. :rofl:

And now… here’s the list of all the fangirls and fanboys who volunteered for the pg 20 army! :boogie: Everyone I wrote on the list is here (39, including myself), and if I’m wrong about that even after doing head counts, I’m going to kick something, preferably my own head. :O

(Bottom row, left to right)

1. (didn’t know your eye colour so I figured you wouldn’t mind red eyes :XD: )
2. (yes peoples that is a walking waffle :lmao: )
3. (looking very Tifa like ;) )
4. (my right hand sergeant :evillaugh: )
5. (me as my furry persona, the hoplite hopduck *quack* )
6. (you wouldn’t eat a fellow rice ball fangirl would you?! :rofl: )
7. Kurama222 [link] from y!gallery (cosplaying as Aeris, which she once did :D )
8. (you make such a cuuuuuute rice ball :XD: )
9. (since you’ve watched Fruits Basket, I hope you don’t mind appearing as a Kyo cat =P)
10. (don’t fly over my head because I will glomp you for being squishy :glomp: ).


(Second row, left to right)

11. (only after I finished inking did I realise your persona looks a little um… high… ^^; :XD: )
12. (I want a silly hat too T__T )
13. (I hope you don’t mind appearing as Maki, but he was on your ID and I couldn’t resist :XD: )
14. (ALL HAIL FLAN :headbang: )
15. (leave a bite for us, you hear? :XD: )
16. (baaaaaaaaaaaah :giggle: )
17. (I swear, you turned out looking like Soubi from Loveless O__O ).


(Third row, left to right)

18. My best friend Nicole, who you can blame for coming up with the pg 2 closet antics and who puts up with my fangirling with superhuman patience :lmao:
19. (I did a double take when you turned out looking like Riku :XD: )
20. (I hope I got the colours of your persona right ^^; )
21. (that’s the colour of my iPod by the way! :XD: )
22. (one of only two fanboys here, though he claims to have evolved beyond “fanboy” and into “fantoy” so I’ve no idea how to describe him… :lmao: )
23. (I figured anyone would look surprised if a ninja flying squirrel flew overhead… :giggle: )
24. (you make pink look good, unlike that Sophia twit :XD: ).


(Fourth row, left to right)

25. (you have the “AYE!” all to yourself! :laughing: )
26. and 27. and little bro Kurt (you two are real cute together ^__^ )
28. My second best friend Erica who also puts up with my fangirling, and dutifully says hello to Albel and Fayt in my wallet whenever I say so :lmao:
29. (looking as though you want to steal that katana :plotting: )
30. (came across your pic of Layla and thought she’d make a nice persona for you ^^ )
31. (that’s a flight line behind you, not a fart! :rofl: )


(Back row, left to right)

32. Envytehkitsu [link] from y!gallery appearing as a mystery red fangirl ninja until I get a persona description from her ^^;
33. as green fangirl ninja
34. as purple fangirl ninja
35. as blue fangirl ninja (all four of you are the army’s elite bodyguards :D)
36. (I hope that vaguely matches the description you gave me… ^^; )
37. (found a pic one of your friends drew of you and worked off that ^^ )
38. (if there’d been more room I’d have loved to draw more of your character’s outfit T__T )
39. (oranges YAY! :giggle: ).

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And that’s all from me for now – if no one likes this comic I’m gonna cry coz then I got repetitive strain injury for nothing. T___T As for part 3… don’t expect that for a little while until the dead parts of my brain grow back. :crazy: Lol anyway, enjoy everyone! :XD:

Comments


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:iconfox-bells:
HAHA. Albel's expression when he says "Hey, it's a broom closet. We should make out" is PRICELESS. xD

Mmm, tomato juice. >__>

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:icontetra935:
Yeah that is pretty god I told zenphoenixa "DEATH be to sophia!!!" and I had no idea someone else would tale it to be literal. XD
:iconshadow-nori:
EEEee... my left hand is seriously numb so it's hard to type. *o* You got Nori right, but enough of that. Loved the comic... mucho. *-* I love Albel's expression on the preview...

Can't type no more... @_@ HAPPY NEW YEAR!

PS... got the stickers when I got home. <3 THANK YOU :3

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:iconlutra-gem:
Oh yay it's hilarious! Thanks so much for squeezing me in there under the "AYE!" I'm so happy! :love: I was laughing so hard when I saw Sophia and then Fayt was thinking of something else (or maybe he was covering something up?...) And I love Albel's tantrums. I don't specially like Pepitta, she gets on my nerves, but you got her manner on the nail. XD Anyway, yet again, thanks so much for squeezing me in, and I love the comic! Am eagerly awaiting the next installment, but perfectly understanding about work and college and stuff taking ages. :dance:

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Come to the dark side, we have cookies!

In one of my Christmas cards, one of my friends wrote:
"World domination will be ours!
Love Charlotte"
Course it will be min- I mean ours!
:icontungwene:
I about killed myself laughing when I saw the Albel-volcano. That was great! The design was really cool because it was hard to tell if Albel had turned into a volcano or the volcano was just the lower half of him because the shape of the volcano looks like his skirt and the rest of him could've been above the billowing clouds of ash or something.

Glad to see you're not dead and a Happy New Year to ya.

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What does not kill me only makes me stranger.
:iconchuitresu:
Page 15 was the sexiest, with the evil Abel going for a direct approach.

Grrr, every time I see Abel, I'm conflicted. I heart his outfit and love his whole entire character desing, but I'm also very jealous of his curves.

...*Stares at Abel*

Okay, no I take that back. I just love the guy.

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"O-oishi...I feel...funny...NYAH! X3"

And his heart and lungs burst out of his chest.

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:iconryouichi:
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Awesomely hilarious as usuall! Although I feel terrible that you had to suffer all that time in order to make me simply laugh o.o and admire your damn prespective Whoot! xD

I must say my favorite part of the comic was the dead Sophia, you did such a good job there! xD
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:iconpuppetlord:
Eeeeep! :heart: Finally! XD I shall read it now O_o; *fave in advance*

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:iconstanice-on-wing:
You're here! I love you! I missed you SO much! <3 <3 <3 I wanna keep rambling... but I guess I have to tell you how much I loved the comic first xD

NelxClair makes me giggle everytime! The only reason I'd ever go against it would be for NelxCliff. Then Fayt's comment on no more Lesbians... ha!

Then. of course, the fire hazard. I personally have a soft spot for Sophia due to a re-characterization I put her through... but she's still a bothersome trifle in the game xP

Volcano!Albel makes me laugh, too. x3 along with the ketchup. Then, of course, each and every one of us loves to see ourselves drawn and immortalized by you xD but it was fun to find everyone else too. "Ooo! There's Jayme! And Blackdragon! Ah!"

In other news, I hope to bring you pictures in August of (Albel) and I (Fayt) at Otakon x3 I just have to get some things together... mwehehe
:iconpuppetlord:
Favorite pages: 14 and 18. Most favorite would have to be 14 :lmao: Truly, that page is pure genious! Pure, I say!! :XD: No, not just the Sophia dying part, Fayt really is a square! Who knew the embodiment of destruction was such a polygon? :giggle:
Oh, oh, page 18: Flan go "HULK SMASH!!! :pissed:" :rofl:
I should really get to drawing some AlbelxFayt.... Zen, you have made me a full-time supporter of the pairing! :salute: :lmao: :heart:

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